It is widely believed that a host number of people do not really remember the original meaning of festivals which can be related to religion or tradition ;in other words, they only priotrize the fun part of these events to its significant purpose.To my perspective,while I agree that some other purposes were taken the place of some major aim of these festivals , I don't agree that people completely categorize the invaluble meaning of each festival as a forgetten matter.
To commence with, I would put a light on some other purposes which can easily dilute the important meaning of festivals.first and foremost,people do not really pay attention to the aim of each religious or non- religiouse festival.take the magnificent christmas event for example in which people are mostly concerned about buying and receiving gifts, having a traditional meal or shopping.These activities are enjoyable and valuable to spend time on however, I think they should not be priotrized to the more vital point of this event.further and final, some countries take the opportunity of some festivals period to make advancement in their business markets.This conspicuous assertion can be easily cleared up by an example of unbelievable and at the same time immense profit which is gained by most of the chocolate brand owners on Holloween event.
Despite some aims which are really faraway from the considerable purpose of each festivals, I hold this belief that people still keep motivated to remember the bedrock of every festival which is actively held in their nations.a majority of people are of this viewpoint that their both historical and religiouse festivals can bring them the worthwile opportunity to srtenghth the bond among them; to put it more simply when they get together as a family or freiend group they feel they're united as well as powerful.In addition to this formost aim,every festival can also allow them to become more aware of their own or their environment.for instance, christmas which is highly known as a religiouse festival bring this chance to some people to thank their life and continue it in a better focused way.
by way of conclusion, Altought I belive that the original purpose of various festivals can be really forgotten, it seems to me that there are absolutely some people that are really alert to keep the goal of each festival in their mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08184143223 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92620500103 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537084398977 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 97.0 20.2975951904 478% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 251.319020371 49.4020404114 509% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 496.75 106.682146367 466% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 97.75 20.7667163134 471% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.25 7.06120827912 471% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200180398916 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131508380537 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261384545479 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131508380537 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261384545479 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.4 13.0946893788 393% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -26.98 50.2224549098 -54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.1 11.3001002004 364% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.08 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.8 10.1190380762 403% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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