Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, peoplenowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
people tend to have various religious beliefs and celebrate vast number of festivals. In this discussion it is said that people have forgotten all the customs and traditional practices and solely wanted to entertain themselves in some or the other way. In my opinion I feel that people should give equal importance to the traditional beliefs and should also be amused by themselves.
During the olden days, people used to celebrate every festival more happily by understanding the actual meaning behind that festival but nowadays, families are being divided as nuclear families and they are not much interested to celebrate the festival with everyone. this can be considered as the main reasons why this generation could not actually understand the real meaning behind every festival.
In addition to this, mankind these days is being so busy with their household, work that they don't get effective time to spend with the elders to know about the importance of any particular occasion. And I feel that in the school curriculum certain lessons have to be introduced that will tell the importance of our religion, beliefs, customs and traditions. By this way at least kids will know the importance of festivals.
On the whole I would like to conclude by saying that people nowadays are being mechanical and so busy and when ever they get time they would like to entertain themselves and in this trend humans are lacking behind knowing the importance of the festivals and their actual meaning. so, measures have to be taken for atleast their children to know about the great culture that they have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, so, at least, i feel, in addition, in my opinion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05639097744 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60780073664 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545112781955 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4573589908 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232289329134 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952405278002 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453523422096 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139796171377 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649940275902 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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