As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
Nowadays, most adults have full-time jobs in order to keep up with the difficulties of life and in the following paragraphs I’m going to talk to you about the factors that make people satisfied with their jobs and how can employers achieve that, and why I think that job satisfaction is rarely accomplished.
The first thing we’re going to discuss is the factors through which job satisfaction is accomplished. Firstly, work environment should be optimum for employees in order to achieve the workplace’s goals, e.g: stress should be minimal in order for employees to work peacefully. Secondly, the relations between employees should be based on co-operation and respect, for example, people who work with helpful co-workers always feel more satisfied and embraced which help them do better in their jobs. Lastly, work owners should embrace people who work for them and make them feel home, for instance: employers who work out their employees’ problems increase their willingness to work and satisfy their every need.
On the other hand, satisfaction in jobs is quite hard to get due to many reasons. Firstly, work environment is mostly unpleasant, e.g: many corporations and companies’ environments are stressful and unsatisfactory. Secondly, many people do jobs that do not suit their skills nor qualifications, e.g: many adults do jobs that they didn’t even want only because they pay more money that can help with their lives. Thirdly, in most cases people don’t get paid well for their jobs, for instance: some people work hard and never get sufficient money compared to the work they’ve done. All in all, from my point of view, the expectation for job satisfaction for all workers is quite unrealistic because of insufficient payments, stressful work environment, or unhelpful co-workers, despite the fact that, in some cases, some of these factors can be achieved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, i think, in most cases, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3597359736 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04024353362 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524752475248 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1411036013 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.4 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330928477688 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143426471742 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074671107474 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24855732215 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517305669022 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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