In this digital age, media has made it possible to know happenings all around the world. Many people argue that news coming from various media outlets should only contain facts and figures instead of personal view. I strongly believe that news channels are responsible for delivering true information to public and it can only be done by taking an objective approach.
When news channels report subjectively, the personal opinion of news anchors predominates the actual reality. Since it is responsibility of media to make people aware of correct information based on facts, such reporting hurts the credibility of a news source. People also rely on media sources to build a narrative about various current affairs so, misinformation leads to ill-informed opinions. This can result in confusion and wrong judgments made by public. For instance, personal bias of many news anchors while reporting election campaign affects the opinions of voters. Therefore, the only way media can play a positive role in society by staying impartial while reporting.
There is a lot of misinformation these days and many of the news being reported are often untrue. This is because that media giants have their own agendas and they do not feel guilty in promoting them. For instance, in US elections, most of the staff at Washington post supported Hillary Clinton so, they never published about her war crimes. This had a vital impact on the opinions of their readers and Hillary won in states where Washington post was most read newspaper. Moreover, news sources also get monetary benefits from various individuals and even government organizations for writing favourable news about them. As governments around the world fear accountability and criticism, they frequently use such tactics. Therefore, it would be correct to say that fake or partially true news are common these days.
The main function of newspaper is making public aware of circumstances around the world. This includes news from all categories ranging from fashion and sports to crime and politics. It is not only a main tool of building narrative inside a country but also plays a vital role in curating image of a country in the world. For example, countries ,where newspapers highlight positive aspects of their culture, attract plethora of tourists.
To conclude, considering the importance of news in generating public opinion, they should be based on facts only. However, fake news are common due to personal prejudices of people working in media outlets and hidden motives of various rich organizations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 45, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... news channels report subjectively, the personal opinion of news anchors predominates the actual...
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Line 4, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...try in the world. For example, countries ,where newspapers highlight positive aspe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2427184466 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80741212223 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4628244726 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.1818181818 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22206425947 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642036671081 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499546860186 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129633464715 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322213488707 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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