Most people think that truth should be objective rather than subjective when It comes to the news. Do you think all news is true? What is the function of a newspaper?
ONE SCHOOL OF THOUGHTS HAS RECKONED THAT NEWS SHOULD BE DELIVERED UNBIASED INSTEAD OF ONE-SIDED. I PERSONALLY BELIEVE THAT MEDIA HAS BEEN PROVIDING BIASED INFORMATION BECAUSE OF THE INVOLVEMENT OF POLITICAL PEOPLE. JOURNALISTS OF NEWSPAPER HAVE TO PRESENT AN ACTUAL REPORT OF ANY PHENOMENON. THE FACTS OF THE THESIS WILL BE DEMONSTRATED IN FOLLOWING PARAGRAPHS.
CONSIDERING THE ASPECTS WHICH ARE PROVING THAT NEWS, NOWADAYS, ARE ONE-SIDED OR OPINION BASED RATHER THAN REALITY BECAUSE THIS SECTOR HAS BECOME MASSIVE FUNDED BUSINESS AND RESPONSIBILITIES ARE BEING FORGOTTEN. THERE IS NO DENYING THAT AUTHORITY AS WELL AS POLITICIANS OFTEN INTERFERE IN THIS FIELD FOR THEIR PERSONAL BENEFITS THEREFORE THEY TRY TO CHANGE THE NEWS TO SHAPE THE VIEW OF PUBLIC ACCORDING TO THEIR CHOICE. IT CANNOT BE DENIED THAT MANY CIRCUMSTANCE ARE BEING HAPPENED FOR WHICH AUTHORITY IS ANSWERABLE, IN THIS SITUATION PROSPECTIVE FACTS ARE SPREADED. HENCE, MEDIA ,UNDOUBTEDLY, HAS BEEN WORKING WITH UNTRUTH.
CONCERNING TOWARDS THE ROLE 0F NEWSPAPER, IT IS IRREFUTABLE PRINTING MEDIA PLAYS AN INDISPENSABLE ROLE EVERYWHERE. IN THIS CONTEMPORARY ERA MANY INDIVIDUALS ARE STILL USED TO READ NEWS THROUGH PAPER. MOSTLY MASSES RELY ON THIS SOURCE OF INFORMATION THEREFORE THIS IS THE DUTY OF JOURNALISM THAT THEIR WRITING SHOULD BE AUTHENTIC INCLUDED EDITORIAL SECTION BECAUSE THIS PART IS PRESENTED ACCORDING TO THEIR OPINION, BUT STILL NEEDS TO BE FACTUAL. EVENTUALLY, FOR READERS NEWSPAPER ARE SIGNIFICANT INFORMATIVE.
TO SUM UP, IT IS INDISPUTABLE THAT NEWS ARE REPORTED AND FRAMED NOT NEUTRAL AND NEWSPAPER HAVE LARGE VOLUME OF READERS WHO MAKE IT PARAMOUNT.
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... DELIVERED UNBIASED INSTEAD OF ONE-SIDED . I PERSONALLY BELIEVE THAT MEDIA HAS BEE...
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...E OF THE INVOLVEMENT OF POLITICAL PEOPLE . JOURNALISTS OF NEWSPAPER HAVE TO PRESEN...
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...ESENT AN ACTUAL REPORT OF ANY PHENOMENON . THE FACTS OF THE THESIS WILL BE DEMONST...
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...FACTS OF THE THESIS WILL BE DEMONSTRATED IN FOLLOWING PARAGRAPHS. CONSIDERING TH...
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... THE ASPECTS WHICH ARE PROVING THAT NEWS ,NOWADAYS, ARE ONE-SIDED OR OPINION BASED...
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...NG THAT AUTHORITY AS WELL AS POLITICIANS OFTEN INTERFERE IN THIS FIELD FOR THEIR ...
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...VIEW OF PUBLIC ACCORDING TO THEIR CHOICE .IT CANNOT BE DENIED THAT MANY CIRCUMSTAN...
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... THEIR CHOICE .IT CANNOT BE DENIED THAT MANY CIRCUMSTANCE ARE BEING HAPPENED FOR WHICH AUTHORITY ...
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...PPENED FOR WHICH AUTHORITY IS ANSWERABLE ,IN THIS SITUATION PROSPECTIVE FACTS ARE...
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...THORITY IS ANSWERABLE ,IN THIS SITUATION PROSPECTIVE FACTS ARE SPREADED . HENCE,...
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...ITUATION PROSPECTIVE FACTS ARE SPREADED . HENCE, MEDIA ,UNDOUBTEDLY, HAS BEEN WO...
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... IS PRESENTED ACCORDING TO THEIR OPINION , BUT STILL NEEDS TO BE FACTUAL. EVENTUAL...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53174603175 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03757749128 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.2373438767 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160722151651 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547046901858 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369799907486 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983664387633 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146472890539 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.