Some intellectuals from the education field reckon that learners can take advantage by participating in overseas programmes. This practice has effective merits which profoundly outweigh its demerits. The facts of the thesis will be demonstrated in the following paragraphs.
Although if pupils go abroad during the school education they can face difficulties as language can become a bariare as well as not only weather but also customs can create hassles for them, but this is the time when they have an opportunity to grab many things.Undoubtedly, this practice seems fruitful because when a student explores the new country, definitely one has to learn a new language which makes him bilingual. Apart from this, during these moments new culture and customs are being absorbed which are never seen in his home country. Therefore, the mind of teenagers will be broadened as divercities will enhance the circle of thoughts. Hence, these are the precious pros of this trend.
Indeed, homesickness is considered as a major drawback of this exercise because, it is obvious that in this age they are not mature enough and they miss their dears. In Spite of this demerit, during this time they meet with new physiques and ultimately new friends are made. Therbye, their consciousness will be better because they have to decide by themselves which one is better or not in terms of relationship. In addition to this, generally juveniles, who live at homes, are more dependent on parents, but if they spend time in foreign they will become self dependent. Eventually, exchange visits for school enrollers is much lucrative.
To sum up, it can not be denied that if adolescents during their schooling go beyond the borders will face hurdles for surviving as well as they may feel homesick, but they will become definitely wise by exploring new places with many variations and they will become independent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Undoubtedly
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Suggestion:
...tions and they will become independent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, apart from, as to, in addition, as well as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13504823151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85077926937 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575562700965 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.0638603669 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.846153846 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127542755093 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538443012594 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423463434323 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894154319386 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247263739116 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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