Most people try to balance between their work and other parts of their lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What are the reason for this and what can be done to solve this?
In this day and age, various people not be able to keep balance between their work and life. In my essay, i would like to indicate some reasons triggering the issue and suggest some methods to tackle the concerned problem.
A lack of equilibrium between work and life of human is ostensibly attributable to some factors. The most conspicuous one is that the modern society is developing continuously, such trend requiring people to work more than eight hours on a daily basis, therefore they swept into the maelstrom of working. Besides, the fact that work pressure has a tendency of going up demands higher responsibility of labour, hence sensory overload. Additional, manifold dwellers having a low salary must confront expensive subsistence expenses, thereby putting financial burden on workers. Such fact force them to search other jobs to make ends meet, this problem engendering deficiency of time for other activities such as leisure pursuit, travel with family and friend meeting.
Owing to the aforementioned causes, it is high time that imperative approaches should be implemented in order to diminish the issue’s bad outcomes. Firstly, people should hone their time management time competence by setting a diurnal timetable. Apart from that, human could spend time practicing physical exercises, gym, yoga and swimming, for example, this sports contributing to release stress after arduous working day. Regarding the last solution, people being at the helm in enterprise might establish preferential policies for their employees such as remuneration, leave of absence and reward.
In conclusion, balance is extremely essential element. Thanks to that, human could both work hardly and enjoy other parts of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tween their work and life. In my essay, i would like to indicate some reasons tri...
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Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'work'.
Suggestion: hardly work
...ement. Thanks to that, human could both work hardly and enjoy other parts of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44237918216 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84493747589 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691449814126 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3844850063 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2443988818 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765341979716 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763858486141 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141417340043 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446862003542 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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