Nowadays in many people's points of view, the job is as the source of income only, because of an abundant increase in living costs and expenses. So, many people are working on financial aid rather than their benefits that jobs can provide. Even though they are providing lots of benefits while taking the job everyone should consider some points like job satisfaction, career growth.
Firstly before applying job satisfaction is one of the important factor that should consider. For many reasons, this point plays the main role. Now a day’s people are working very hard for development this leads to many problems In their life which causes mental and physical problems. Among all these problems your job should not be another burden to our life. So, job satisfaction will play a key role in this scenario. Many highly qualified, well educated and experienced persons will join the jobs that provide the satisfaction to avoid the mental tension in their life.
Secondly, the most important thing is a career growth job that anyone is preferring to join they should choose in a way that they will have better career growth. For this scenario normally we should consider the infrastructure of the company and working environment in the company. Even though with a high salary of there are no good working conditions we cannot continue the job in a satisfactory manner. The co-worker also plays a major role like competitors which will improve the competitive spirit and this will provide the will to reach career growth.
Finally, I conclude that apart of the benefits of the salary that the company provides. We should consider job satisfaction and we should consider the career growth. One should consider the job that satisfies this important thing.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...hing is a career growth job that anyone is preferring to join they should choose in a way tha...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and working environment in the company. Even though with a high salary of there are no good...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a satisfactory manner" with adverb for "satisfactory"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g conditions we cannot continue the job in a satisfactory manner. The co-worker also plays a major role ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: APART_A_PART[2]
Message: Wrong collocation. Did you mean 'apart from'?
Suggestion: apart from
...areer growth. Finally, I conclude that apart of the benefits of the salary that the com...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03780068729 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57063049493 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5234834559 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254321605139 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937439065171 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546458899394 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162623947735 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059946679995 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...hing is a career growth job that anyone is preferring to join they should choose in a way tha...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and working environment in the company. Even though with a high salary of there are no good...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a satisfactory manner" with adverb for "satisfactory"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...g conditions we cannot continue the job in a satisfactory manner. The co-worker also plays a major role ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: APART_A_PART[2]
Message: Wrong collocation. Did you mean 'apart from'?
Suggestion: apart from
...areer growth. Finally, I conclude that apart of the benefits of the salary that the com...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03780068729 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57063049493 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5234834559 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254321605139 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937439065171 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546458899394 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162623947735 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059946679995 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.