Most societies have homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money.To what extent do you agree?
In contemporary society, homeless people increase annual year. People believe that the best solution for this problem which give them money. However, I agree that people have plenty of best way to solve this problem.
On the on hand, people believe that giving money for homeless people is very good solution for society. First of all, governments help them with public financial charity organisation to take the money. Homeless people can buy food or tent if they spend the enough money to purchasing these.
On the other hand, I think that giving money for homeless people is not the best way because of some reasons. First of all, if people give them money, this will make them to become lazy because they do not need to find a job due to they still have money annual month. Moreover, when people give them money, this money maybe help them purchasing a tent or food. However, people cannot give money for everyone who do not have home or job. Therefore, this is not the best meansure to help homeless people.
In conclusion, giving money for homeless people is not the best way to help them because this way brings some drawbacks for them or society.
- In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. 56
- The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.https://ielts-simon.com/.a/6a0120a5bb05d8970c0120a8cfa023970b-pi 67
- More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 67
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as South pole.Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages. 56
- Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...owever, I agree that people have plenty of best way to solve this problem. On the on...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to purchase' or 'purchase'.
Suggestion: to purchase; purchase
... them money, this money maybe help them purchasing a tent or food. However, people cannot ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73399014778 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20896279064 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458128078818 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8448080139 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0833333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467343077125 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209625484176 0.084324248473 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833823506648 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335758496878 0.151304729494 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875301314552 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.