In most of the societies the role of mother and father differs What are the causes of this difference What will be the parental roles in future

Essay topics:

In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs. What are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future?

Family is the building block of the society . Parents play important and crucial role in the development of children. The role of mother and father changes with time. In olden days, mothers used to nourish their children while fathers were the bread earners of the family. But in modern world, most people prefer nuclear families and both parents are earning which leads to financial stability and thus equaling the responsibilities of both parents towards their children.

In most communities during the past, the role of women was to take care of the children and to nourish them with good habits and knowledge. While fathers were the bread earners of the family so they didn’t paid much attention towards the growth of their children. Most women were not educated at that time due to which they were deprived of working out. The kind responsibility of females revolves around their little one.

While in modern world, females becomes educated and started working out from homes and helps in attaining financial stability . Men and women now believe that they have equal responsibility towards their child. People tend to live in nuclear families which gives equal responsibilities to guys towards their kid. Sometimes fathers also helps the child in their study and does the house work. Parents together paln the things for the shiny future of their kid.

In conclusion, the modern society is changing the role of both mother and father. Now both tend to have equal responsibility towards child, house or finances. There must be no difference in having equal responsibilities of the children in future also.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ily is the building block of the society . Parents play important and crucial role...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'didn't' requires base form of this verb: 'pay'
Suggestion: pay
...ad earners of the family so they didn’t paid much attention towards the growth of th...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d helps in attaining financial stability . Men and women now believe that they hav...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ponsibilities of the children in future also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, as to, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12075471698 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62925082936 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501886792453 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4945841363 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8235294118 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179775677551 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709293380701 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740972150706 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12649671268 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734092557254 0.056905535591 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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