the diagram below shows the stages and euipments used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes
The diagram illustrate the stages and the equipments used in cement manufacturing and how cement is used in construction.
The first diagram depicts the processes that are involved in the fabrication of cement. The foremost process is called Crushing. It is the simplest process in which the raw materials are crushed with the machine known as crusher. Crusher converts Limestone and clay into powdered form.After transforming into the powdered from the powder is mixed together and sent in the rotating heater where heat is supplied from an external source. Grinder is used to finely grind the heated mixture . The crushed part is known as Cement which is further packed in bags for further useage in construction
At the construction site the cement is converted to concrete. Cement is first diluted with 10%water in a concrete mixer. About 25% of sand and 50% of gravel is added into the concrete mixer . Gravel is called as small stones in plain language. This mixer turns cement to concrete. Concrete is used as the hold between bricks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The diagram illustrate the stages and the equipments used in c...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... involved in the fabrication of cement. The foremost process is called Crushing. It...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...s Limestone and clay into powdered form.After transforming into the powdered from the...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... used to finely grind the heated mixture . The crushed part is known as Cement whi...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Cement is first diluted with 10%water in a concrete mixer. About 25% of sand a...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... gravel is added into the concrete mixer . Gravel is called as small stones in pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05780346821 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66986203114 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5509456751 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9166666667 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328523771524 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119820602446 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119020489896 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26627824437 0.15604864568 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135239757014 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.