In most of the society, and the role of mother and father differs.
What are the causes of this difference?
what will be the parental roles in the future?
Parents play an important role in children life. The role of mother and father are different to his or her child in respect to the society beliefs. This essay will discuss the main causes of differentiation of the fathers and mothers role in society and futuristic views of the parental roles.
There are various reasons for creating differential parental role of mother and father in the society. Firstly, parents are illiterate. People are not aware of good and bad impacts of their actions to their children and what should be done to encourage their children to learn. For instance, parents are not aware of diets what will be good for children health. Secondly, people still follow up their traditional customs and traditions. Parents usually follow up their orthodox customs and traditions that results in creating differences role of mothers and father.
However, in the future the scenario will change. The duties of mother and father will be equally divided. Parents will help each other and equally share their responsibilities while raising their children. For example, both mother and father would work in order to increase their financial stability for their children. Both the mother and father will be working from professionals. We know that due to the inflation, the prices of products are skyrocketing so both parents have to be working to gain financial freedom for raising children.
To conclude, the major causes are for creating differences in the role of mother and father are parents are illiterate and following up their traditional art and customs. However, both mother and father will equally divide their duties and both will be working professionals in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20727272727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69335024406 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443636363636 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.20027716 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2352941176 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412838830892 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155249112975 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970693322729 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294583958689 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990625674582 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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