In most successful organisations some people believe that communication between managers and workers is important while other people said that other factors are more significant What is your opinion

Essay topics:

In most successful organisations, some people believe that communication
between managers and workers is important, while other people said that other factors
are more significant. What is your opinion?

The factors contributing to the success of organisations are always under discussion by many people. It is said that communication between the managers and employees is important. The other people claimed that other factors are more vital. Let me consider both views before reaching concrete decision.

As we know, a company is an entity including a variety of levels of management. Thus the effective interaction between executives and subordinates is likely lead to work understanding. The employees not only probably get these appropriate advice and approval from their employers who also oversee progress in project process. Accordingly, the tasks will be accomplished efficiently and punctually. On the other hand, a good establishment relationship in companies is actually one of the overriding factors to boost productivity. According to recent research, a friendly work environment can help the employees build their sense of belonging and connections that contributes to reduce stress and pressure.

Another contributing determinant is performance appraisant which shows appreciation of their subordinates' competences, abilities and skills. The financial rewards including extra bonuses and salary income that are not only motivations to enhance work performance, are but also talents retention strategies. According to recent survey data, there are about 22% of workers who have intent to quit their present jobs on account of poor reward scheme and recognition system.

Last but not least, companies setting the aim of remaining stable profits are the ones that know their customers' needs and have timely policy to keep themself not being out of date.
Conclusion, communication between managers and employees is, in fact, the key. Nonetheless, it cannot be denied the importance of the other factors to the successful organisations.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, nonetheless, so, thus, in fact, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69675090253 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19144191796 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638989169675 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8501453486 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20630586184 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727122491654 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104927453544 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128760480029 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137543578733 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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