In most successful organisations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers is important, while other people said that other factors are more significant. What is your opinion?
In recent decades, it has been argued that whether conducive communication between managers and their employees is the key factor resulting in the success of a corporation or not. Although well interaction is extremely essential for a company’s development, making it successful would require more important factors.
There are a variety of reason why this method could highly contributes to a company’ success. First, by improving the interaction between the employers and the workers, the relationship among them would be significantly strengthened. Thus, it could ensure the consistence of the company’s developing strategy, which is considered as one of the most important requirement leading to the success. Second, well communication could help the managers with either boosting the staffs’ spirits or inspriring them whenever the corporation has to cope with problems. For example, due to the improved interaction between employers and employees, Steve Job has found a sensible strategy to solve several issues in his corporation called Apple during the economic crisis in 1997 and made that becoming a giant technological company nowadays.
Nevertheless, a myriad of other factors are considered more crucial for a company’s success. First, by optimizing the corporation’s organizational structure, employees could easily understand their authorities. Therefore, they could not only play the right roles in the company but also work in the right places, which might act as an incentive for them to fully reach their potential as well as subtaincially boost their productivity . Second, since a company’s orientation of profit remains unchanged over time, its organization and business models are recommended to be flexible. For instance, in 1916, the Coca Cola’s bottlers has approved a significant change in the packaging method of the beverages, which is effectively set their brand apart from the competition at that period of time.
In conclusion, even though interaction play an important role in a company’s developing strategy, other aspects such as optimization and flexibility are considered more crucial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'contribute'
Suggestion: contribute
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.703125 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27455380373 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0660706593 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.384615385 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14709799601 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592034236549 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555229304848 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102801226869 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355035802519 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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