in most successful orgnaizations, some people believe that communication between managers and worker is important, other people said that other factors are more important. Give is your opinion
It is true that many factors affect the success of organaization. while I accept that communication between managers and workers is a priority, I also suppose that other factors would be effective in acting successful role of a corporation.
it is no doubt that communication plays a vital role in successful orgnaizations. Fristly, communication ensure the optimal performance tasks in corporation. It is considered as imparting information between managers and employees such as notification new plans from staffs or representing initiatives from workers for the tasks in order to gain desired results. Secondly, communication may be the best way to make close-knit relationships between managers and workers. when we work in a flexible environment , it is likely that we can easily find own passion for jobs. This helps us complete assignment quickly as well as promote carrier rapidly. as the result, those employee can be further cultivated and they would be inspired to make more contributions to the development of the business.
there are some reasons why contribution factors also bring success for enterprises. first of all, the ability of staff nembers plays a necessary role. if a staff perform tasks without pieces of knowledge about specialization, it is hard for them to obtain good results. this can lead to a profound effect on the prosperity of the company. moreover, the facility of a company is also important by giving modern equipment which will be advantages to help workers develop better and create promotions for corporation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30894308943 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22993708399 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8735183941 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173973227715 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567883275111 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622661106094 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134756273505 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713863859198 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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