the best way to resolve the international environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree
it is true that tackling the global environmental issues has long been a major topic of concern in societies. Beside rising the cost of fuel, I believe that there are alternative measures that would be effective.
national authorities should raise taxes on the needs of fuel. it may be a effective way to ensure that people use car less. The first benefit is to have a reduction in exhaust emission. this would alleviate environmental issues such as slowing process of global warming or pollution being control. In addition, applying high taxes on the cost of fuel will decrease the levels of depletion of natural resources. For example, instead of excessive explorations , we utilize responsible national resources when the cost of fuel are becoming expensive.
there are more effective ways that government and local authorities can apply to gain the best results. The first measure is to introduce restrictions on the use of private vehicles. Citizen may take into the considerations on ban of government and after that they will alter private car by choosing public transports. The second measure is that local authorities should allocate resources to the development alternative resources, which include wind power, solar power,… this would not cause a negative environmental effect and being safe for human. Finally, as part of wide efforts to achievement sustainable development, corporation should share scientific knowledge and advances in technology should be a priority so that people aware of the significance of environmental protection as well as saving energy
In conclusion, although rising the cost of fuel would be a welcome measure, I suppose that other measures should be a priority to improve the international environmental issues
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, second, so, well, for example, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39492753623 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08177250016 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.522937587 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.538461538 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139899570455 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479550022716 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333625412139 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984808077488 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290891065683 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.