Most of the world's poor live in countries where tourism is a growing industry. The issue is that tourism does not benefit the poorest. How can the income generated by tourism benefit the poor? Give reasons for your answer.
Tourism plays a detrimental role in our ways of living. Undeniably, tourism has a powerful influence on the way we live, and its impact is often negative. Although we might not like to admit it, tourism has created inevitably unpleasant consequences for the poor. In the present essay, I intend to explain the problems of tourism in our cultures and lives are severe and offer two essential solutions for solving them.
Notably, there are several critical disadvantages to the tourism industry. In the first place, the cost of living is considerably higher in tourist destinations around the world. An example may help clarify the point. In India, cities with more tourist attractions are more expensive than that of other cities. Another noteworthy problem of tourism is that sometimes they do not respect locals traditions inadvertently, which entail conflicts. As things stand right now, instead of all of the opportunities that tourism can bring, they can put the integrity of a country in great danger.
One possible solution these days is that the government should invest the money earned by the tourism industry in other parts of the country. For one thing, they can do some cost-cutting measures in favor of the poor. For instance, people living conditions can drum up with increasing their health insurance and decreasing their medical costs. Another thing is that they can improve their inter-city roads. As an illustration, with better ways, the poor have a better situation, and tourists experience a happier vacation, and this can plow the money back to the country.
Another solution is that the government should create employment for locals. Doctor Graham, the enchanted economist, believes that producing jobs can help the poor to break the cycle of poverty and help them much more than we think it does. As has been demonstrated before, poor people who have jobs not only avoiding committing the crime but also try to smooth over their situations. In other words, there is a proverb that goes like this: An idle mind is the devil's workshop.
In conclusion, it can be stated that the problem of tourism is critically threatening the health and happiness of human beings. With careful planning, education, and cooperation, we should eradicate the problem and eliminate its menacing side effects. The hope is to make the world a safer place for future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'devils'' or 'devil's'?
Suggestion: devils'; devil's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, another thing, for instance, in conclusion, for one thing, in other words, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10997442455 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74888594011 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57800511509 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0926550986 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8181818182 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7727272727 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249373279555 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700258736375 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491499414997 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135508344109 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530311110873 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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