Mothers play key roles in the upbringing of children. But in the recent times both
parents are getting busy with professional life. Who in your opinion should take the
responsibility of child care now?
There’s no denying how important a role the mother plays in the upbringing of her
children. But torn by modern economics, mothers are leaving home for professional
practice, raising the question “who now takes care of the children?” In my belief, though,
all efforts to replace the proverbial mother are destined to be futile.
Observing Nature, scientifically or other wise, tells us that being a mother, if it were a
social role, is ideally possible by the child bearing female and others may only be nurses
or patrons. The physiological and psychological exclusiveness of the mother means all
the other social entities and all the greatness of science and civilization can only
supplement, and never replace, her part in the upbringing of children. Any one else
trying to don her role is simply unnatural.
But of course there is opinion in the contrary also. Modern science flaunts its age old
practice of replicating nature and natural processes. Now more than ever humans and
their society are evolving frequently against the tide of Nature, and civilization sustains
this evolution. Such evolution has also effected the socio-economic distinction of men
and women. Now in the industry women are producing as much as men do. So “women
are better off in the house” is no longer true.
While such human evolution is true and should morally be supported, going against
Mother Nature, when we’re clearly not in a position to, is immoral. Science has not yet
found a biological and psycho-social alternative for the natural mother. And while
gender equality is great, it never means fusion of the two poles of our species. I don’t
believe science never has strived to eliminate sex because it is simply impracticable. So
men and women, so uniformly productive as they recently are, don’t have to utilize their
worth in the same end of civilization.
If one person, or sex, is naturally gifted to play a special and vital role in the society, it
is her duty to thrive in it. I therefore conclude that in a child’s life its mother is
irreplaceable, and, hence, it is she who should rear her child.
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- Mothers play key roles in the upbringing of children But in the recent times both parents are getting busy with professional life Who in your opinion should take the responsibility of child care now 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0702247191 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89674574386 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6688012454 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.277777778 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209442269781 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565001924269 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627613373435 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486719614826 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496376606963 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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