Multi-cutural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic people, bring more benefits th drawbacks to a country. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Due to the widely open policies in economy and immigration of majority nations, people from variant ethnic have a chance to create a common society. Although this phenomenon conducts both advantages and disadvantages, it seems to me that the multi-cultural societies have more positive than negative. In this essay, information and evidence are given to clarify my point of views.
Firstly, because of helping citizens to understand different cultures and approach new languages, living in a multi-racial society outperforms the optimizing method to enrich life experiences. We can directly learn about others customs and traditions, leading to an opportunity to study about a new country without having to travel there. For example, in Singapore and Malaysia, which are known as multi-racial countries, Malaysians, Chinese, Indians... are living peacefully together. By contributing an ethnic diversity society, they can absorb different habits to their common benefits.
Secondly, a multi-cultural society educates people how to respect and tolerate the other religion and belief. These benefits can lead to the remarkable alleviation in regional and ethnic conflicts as well as the racist ideology. Moreover, people from different backgrounds have majority things to offer in terms of ideas. In the US for instance, the immigration of high achieving scholars, engineers and other skilled professionals create conductive the environment for competition, innovation, efficacy and become the key elements of the economy development.
In conclusion, I believe there should not have any barrier between human beings. People from all over the world can absolutely live well together despite the skin color variation or the different in religion, ethnic, culture to create a better world for our next generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71955719557 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09630818207 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653136531365 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1569941697 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0996522491962 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329371170246 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274608596817 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582723425116 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151521476518 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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