Multinational companies are establishing their business in developing countries .This trend is seriously damaging our life .Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of multinational companies.
No doubt, the intercontinental agencies have an immensely vertibule in the divergent parts of the world .Usually ,it can be clearly considered in this modern era how the business is being established by multinational companies in all over the world and the life of people is damaged due to such kinds of strategies. The merits and demerits of multinational companies establishment in flourishing countries are following.
To begin with , it can be clearly notified that the multinational companies have a huge positive impact on human life due to providing an employment to the native people of country ,where the branch is established by them .However, innovative products are launched in the market by different prices and with great varieties .In this modern era a lot things is used by people with fully equipped by useful features like ; mobile phone, laptops and electronic gadgets so all these things are made by companies.In fact, the tax is paid to country government by company for an expanding their business.
On the flip side, some of the problems are created by growing number of companies in different countries like; foreign worker are hired from different nations for working and the less priority is given to the native people of that country .In fact, things made by company have a negative impact on the traditional products that made by the local people.
Every coin has two sides so same as multinational companies have a great condolences in the humans life whether it is bad or good. However, people need to understand the both aspects of multinational companies and the cooperate should be done by them with each other for being a successful as well as the ameliorate of their nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in fact, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01052631579 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.924256377 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536842105263 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.036371724 49.4020404114 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 238.0 106.682146367 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.5 20.7667163134 229% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258088525135 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147873912798 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534785071912 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1613005853 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632077022955 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 13.0946893788 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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