Multinational companies are increasingly making their products available all over the world and damaging our local quality of life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Multinational corporates have been expanding their business to the wide range of countries which mean their products exist in lots of (informal) countries. Certain people believe that it must be harming the quality of life local residents. I massively cannot deal with this opinion on how the provision of international products in many countries will have produced extensive benefits to those citizens.
To commence, it is resulting in the condition in which societies in general are able to fulfil their necessities by purchasing the items produced by the multinational companies. We cannot neglect if the local industry has not provided the needs of societies in all aspect. For instance, the domestic factory of Indonesia has no power to supply the oat products because this country does not have capacity in producing oat as the main ingredient. Therefore, a foreign industry will be operating own manufacture in this south-east Asian country to dealing with this scarcity of local community. It would be much better inviting qualified foreign entrepreneur to run the expected business supply rather than establishing local business that has no capacity in competitive level to grasp the competitive advantage for both countries.
Moreover, the occurrence of multinational companies in different countries will boost the economic activities up. Firstly, the local manpower must be recruited in empowering the inhabitants to run the business circle. They can earn income by getting involved in the business activity which has been supporting to funding their family’s basic need fulfilment. They might be tough in striving their livelihood if there would not be developed the foreign industrial sector in their home town.
To recapitulate, the occurrence of foreign industry in certain countries never harm the quality of lives of the local residents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uality of lives of the local residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48263888889 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98418663761 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.24600006 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.461538462 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138403410446 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549303523749 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031719561223 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909266900694 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267798172765 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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