My dream jobs
I dreamed of being a successful business person or designer since I was fifteenth. I followed a lot of TV shows about successful people in business, fashionistas, designers, and stylists, and I had chances to meet some of them in real-life. They are my true inspiration to find future careers; they are smart, creative, and have a lot of daring ideas. As learning from their roll-models, I gained more knowledge and updated more new fashion trends around the world. Moreover, business and design are free works; people who work in those industries need to travel and communicate a lot. As a fashion and travel lover, I am eager to visit more places and learn new culture’s patterns.
A businessman is a person who works in commerce, especially at the executive level, and they are brilliant and daring. Moreover, they have to change their strategy regularly to approach more customers. The businessman is good at understanding his/her customers, that is the critical point of trading. However, if I want to work in business, I should be good at math and marketing. Marketing is a subject that teaches us how to explain our products to everyone, how to increase the ranking of each product.
Fashion design is the art of applying design, aesthetics, and natural beauty to clothing and its accessories. Similar to the businessman, the designer also needs to be creative in their work. Notably, the designer has inspiration from the surrounding environment, such as, from their friends, family, pets, or only from the road of the countryside that they have been. Some designers have ideas audaciously, their priority is building their work, and very few of it has been affected by their audience’s opinion.
To persuade those two jobs, I am thinking of opening a fashion brand so that I can combine design and business in the future. Besides design clothes, I will also match some accessories, bags, and shoes. My product collection target is friendly and suitable for everyone, so my customers can find themselves being trendy, style, and comfortable in each of my designs. After the first few stores, I will start a professional fashion company to support my artwork. I hope my company will not only contribute to improving the outlook of people but also help to develop the Vietnamese garment industry.
Some people think that business and design are free and accessible works. But they don’t know how stressful that people in those two fields have to suffer, such as, you have to read a lot to be creative to adapt to new trends and then invent new items. Moreover, funding is always a big struggle for a young startup. However, giving up is not in my dictionary; I will do step by step to conquer the issue. And I believe one day, I can make my dream come true.
- Nowadays, many people think that we should spend our youth traveling around the world. While other millennials and older generations believe that we should invest more time in studying and working, we can save the traveling and life-enjoying activities wh 56
- In the future, it seems more difficult to live on Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets, such as Mars. To what extent do you disagree or agree with this statement? 56
- My dream jobs 56
- In the future, it seems more difficult to live on Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets, such as Mars. To what extent do you disagree or agree with this statement? 73
- Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the government Some people think that is a good thing while others argue that it is not suitable Discuss both views and give your own opinions 74
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2326.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 474.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90717299578 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84488019137 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516877637131 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 709.2 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 0.809619238477 1359% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4156708492 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.04 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.96 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135356766478 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422453346045 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784958335171 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07787379672 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663712418324 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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