Natural resources like oil, forests and fresh water are indispensable gifts of mother nature to humans. These natural sources are in fact the reason why life exists on Earth. Other than providing the basic necessities, they are also the supplier of energy and luxury. However in recent years these necessities have become targets to human greed. It is the reason why these natural resources are being consumed at an alarming rate now a days.
The humans utilised natural resources to survive and to fulfil basic requirements in the history. Since the industrial revolution there has been a competition among the countries and the individuals to become rich and powerful. This greed has caused the exploitation of natural resources and today some of the natural resources are on the verge of extinction. Apart from extinction, the overuse of the natural resources has caused a serious harm to the environment. The gases like carbon monoxide, which is emitted due to consumption of wood and oil is regularly degrading the environment. These gases are also causing holes in the ozone layer hence making way for harmful ultraviolet rays to penetrate atmosphere and reach earth. These negative impacts are the major cause of health problems in people and animals. Some species of animals and birds suffered so much that they are completely wiped out now.
It is high time now and this problem needs serious consideration. This problem can be only countered with human awareness and policy implementation. The people should be made aware about the issue and the hazard it is causing to the humans and the animals. On the other hand some international and national policies should be framed. It is equally important to implement the already existing policies on climate change, sustainable development and pollution control.
In this crucial time, it becomes very important to address this issue globally. If the natural resources are not utilised in a sustainable manner, our future generations will not have access to them. Awareness of people and strict implementation of international policies can ensure these natural resources' availability in future. The energy needs have to be fulfilled by renewable sources of energy like solar and wind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ists on Earth. Other than providing the basic necessities, they are also the supplier of energy a...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...also the supplier of energy and luxury. However in recent years these necessities have ...
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Line 1, column 431, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... are being consumed at an alarming rate now a days. The humans utilised natural resourc...
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Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... being consumed at an alarming rate now a days. The humans utilised natural resourc...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...oitation of natural resources and today some of the natural resources are on the verge of e...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sustainable manner" with adverb for "sustainable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... the natural resources are not utilised in a sustainable manner, our future generations will not have a...
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Line 7, column 298, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...ional policies can ensure these natural resources availability in future. The energy need...
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...re these natural resources availability in future. The energy needs have to be fulfilled ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, apart from, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22991689751 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82305310605 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537396121884 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.2166734349 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8181818182 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4090909091 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251472268011 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694070221124 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069335184433 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14799843339 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624259454108 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.