New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent years, consumers have shifted from traditional retail therapy to the ease of virtual shopping carts. The question arises, has this shift been able to transform the lives of retail customers? In this essay, I will explain exactly what this change entails and support my view that yes, there has been quite an apparent change.
Firstly, online shopping has evolved much since its launch in the era of the “dot com” boom, early 2000s. Nowadays, luxury commodities are available at the touch of one click on mobile phones, such as Instagram stores. From this, customers have derived an increased purchasing power with the saturated fast-fashion market; one store might have a tee-shirt for £5, while another has it on sale for £2.50. Furthermore, even grocery shopping is possible from the ease of one’s couch. Prior to this trend, malls and markets were visited with friends and society was not so isolated in terms of basic human interaction or dependant on technology.
When it comes to selling, along with our well-known brands, a usual consumer is now also a seller. This is because the quick acceptance of e-commerce given way to reduced barriers of entry. Whether it is reselling expensive items, say my Air Max 95s, or niche products, customised metal bookmarks, anything is possible.
In conclusion, my opinion stands to say, common shoppers lives have changed drastically. There is no longer a monopoly of bigger and wealthier brands. For both selling and buying, retail consumers has been empowered in futuristic ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1626984127 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6168431078 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706349206349 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5646139488 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9285714286 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164620955023 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048802296924 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421258866173 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941811164958 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307968322965 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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