The table illustrates the distance travelled on bike, divided by age and gender, determined by a study conducted over a 25-year period in Britain.
In general, it is apparent that cycling is most sought after by men, especially adolescent boys, whereas the exact opposite is true for women. However, the overall trend is also seen to decline over the duration of the study, regardless of age and gender.
Focusing on men, we can see that teenage boys covered an average of roughly 150 plus miles, each annually, making the mileage the greatest out of all the other groups. On the other hand, the distance traveled by the opposite sex is much less, with a minimum of as low as 9 and capping at 56 miles for the young girls.
While these may be great figures, the trend of cycling declined over the two and a half decade long period. All groups except from men of 18-59 year olds’, which underwent a slight 9 mile rise from its initial 71, saw a steady decrease. The younger men went from 226 miles initially, to half that in the 25th year. As is true for boys girls younger than the age of 10 as well as retiring adults, with beginning distance as 32,18,a and 29 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...men, especially adolescent boys, whereas the exact opposite is true for women. Ho...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'rise' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'rises'.
Suggestion: rises
... olds’, which underwent a slight 9 mile rise from its initial 71, saw a steady decre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, well, whereas, while, in general, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57276995305 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40226075862 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638497652582 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4994553319 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140070409004 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610871915419 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103628850252 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113083324763 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134262427461 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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