The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.
The diagram illustrates the process of recycling metal cans for commercial reuse.
Overall, there are 7 steps for one round of the procedure which then repeats in a ongoing cycle hence why, a striking 74% of cans are recycled in the UK.
Once done with the cans, people throw the garbage into trash bins dedicated for this purpose and identification for the bin workers, who collect the waste in a heavy machinery truck, on specific days. The material is then delivered for cleaning, sorting, shredding and compressing at factories with intelligent robots for this task alone.
After the initial pre-processing, what’s left over of the aluminium is melted and pressed into rolls of plated metal, 2.5 to 6 millimeter in thickness. At this point, the sheet is used for making cans once again which are then reused by companies how they please - for instance, branding, as seen in the diagram. The cycle repeats once distributed into the retail market once again for purchase by the average responsible buyer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... of the procedure which then repeats in a ongoing cycle hence why, a striking 74%...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... pressed into rolls of plated metal, 2.5 to 6 millimeter in thickness. At this p...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed into rolls of plated metal, 2.5 to 6 millimeter in thickness. At this point, ...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'millimeter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'millimeters'.
Suggestion: millimeters
... into rolls of plated metal, 2.5 to 6 millimeter in thickness. At this point, the sheet ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05357142857 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69957404242 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.7357370524 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137984459225 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824873673377 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112442612918 0.0603063233224 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130050249456 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127293091919 0.0580467560999 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.