Despite showing commitment to truth-telling and allowing the release of news to the public through print or televised media, even without the fears of censorship or pressures from the governments, some people think news editors are under influence of many hidden factors like political motives or financial gains. I think editors are bound to show to the public what the masses actually want to know and of course, our world would be a better place to live, with less anxiety and stress, if journalists only show the good picture to their target audience.
There may be multiple reasons for deciding which news should be aired to the masses. For example, some of the editors will be following the code of sharing truth and avoidance of hiding the facts and figures from the general public. By sharing every bits and pieces of information, editors actually put the onus of perceiving the meaning by the readers themselves. Of course, some of the editors are under pressure, either from the producers or media-owners, government officials. For example, in many countries, there are censorship boards, which filter the news before it reaches to the public according to the local tradition, religion, regimens or some political motives. Last but not least, some editors would be behaving as black-sheep of their profession, by either swaying away after the lust of financial gains or blackmailing someone with rich or authoritative.
On the other side, journalist claim that whatever they report is as according to the wishes and liking of their viewers. For example, people go after the news filled with suspense, sensations, crime stories. Indeed many listeners like the negative way of portraying the news to satisfy their inner self, avidly inclining to the breaking news related to turmoil, pessimism or chaos.
Although editors associated with the print media as well as broadcasting have the responsibility to share the information to public with the intention of telling truth and not hiding anything from their listeners, yet many raise the need of reporting responsible journalism. There is already too much stress and anxiety in this materialistic world. Certainly, many people succumb to diseases and ailments just because of irresponsible reporting of falsifying facts.
In conclusion, editors should not get influenced by anything and should spread the real news in a sublime way in order to inculcate the sense of hope and optimistic ideas among their target audience.
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 67
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. 11
- Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village. 73
- News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would be better if more good news was reported? 73
- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.Summarise the information by selecting and r 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25062656642 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7878845789 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3690292726 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.666666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224647141189 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671239526353 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509016357191 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118821820574 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598491901166 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.