News media has become more influential in people's lives. Others believe it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agreed that news media influence people increasingly in daily life in order to receive a number information from far-away places. However, it is a disagreement this brings the detrimental impact.
To begin with, several news media develop negatively to everyday activities because of the unfiltered information. That is to say, when people access writing in some virtual sources, especially the Internet, frequently do these invalids due to uncredible websites. For example, the unknown data in an article about the increase numbers of Covid-19 sufferers in Indonesia throughout January 2021 originated by uncredited web had been viewed by citizens, then this affected daily basis since employees were mentally exhausted to attend the office. Although hoaxes exist in many mediums of news, the merit is more beneficial because it provides accessibility to acknowledge persons about circumstances in another part of the world.
Nevertheless, individuals experience an immense effect of news media in their life due to receiving recent events in other regions. Thanks to advance technology, by only an easy way, the particular credible information is on the hand in a second, and travelling further to the direct location is unneeded. For instance, oceanography students of Indonesia University consider reading articles to acquire knowledge in BBC.com by their own smartphone, with merely one-simple clicking and using a filter-topic feature, so that they find the real-time issues related to marine life to unexceed 5 seconds, without any live observation. Therefore, it is believed that no demerit development of news sources.
In conclusion, it is true that media of news impact positively in everyday personal life, obtaining many reports from other continents effortlessly. If persons desire to avoid the negativity, they shall nurture the awareness of misleading sources precisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61324041812 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07267293131 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668989547038 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6834445449 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191808641406 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678025791803 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624952115065 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103082632807 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180547468207 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.05 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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