Newspapers are no longer as important as they once were, since we now have instant access to the latest news via the internet. I quite agree with that statement. In this essay I am going to discuss two sides of this.
Clearly, the advent of the Internet has given people many benefits. An example is its utility, and it helps you find all sorts of sources as quickly as you can, especially the most important ones in society, and you get to know them very quickly thanks to the Internet. An outstanding benefit that comes from the Internet is entertainment. Only with the Internet can you listen to music, watch movies, play games and so on. That an article could not bring that for us.
On the other hand, newspapers have their own benefits as well. Now, for example, while the information in the papers was slow but surely true,
the accuracy of this carefully tested information reached the people. More than that, you can read it again and again if you want to. And taking care of them is not too difficult. Newspapers are also reused by people, and are of great help in life, such as serving as decorations, table lining... An outstanding benefit when compared with the Internet is the cost. Buying a newspaper is far cheaper than paying for the Internet each month.
In conclusion, the Internet will provide entertainment, and articles will tend to be accurate. But the Internet has more benefits, so their more emerging is just unavoidable.
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up to date access to the news on the internet To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience You should w 56
- The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 78
- The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... an article could not bring that for us. On the other hand, newspapers have their...
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...than paying for the Internet each month. In conclusion, the Internet will provide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75590551181 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57582632756 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4558976548 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208297510719 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059411073446 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478728294915 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102599041174 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043303902269 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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