In the digital age, the Internet is becoming popular in daily life. Therefore, the magazines are less significant on a daily basis than they used to be. In the following essay, these both statements will be interrupted.
Obviously, it is true that nowadays, people usually get the information by surfing the Internet on their smartphone. Firstly, we can see clearly that the information is on the air regularly everyday on YouTube and people can get it on their phone. Secondly,
the news is also played on TV everyday. To be more detailed, several programs on TV which are related to the news are becoming more and more diverse, then people can get the intelligence by watching the TV. It is more convenient and suitable for any age. Furthermore, the number of the magazine factories are also reduced dramatically so newspapers are less produced and reading the newspaper becomes an ancient hobby these days.
On the other hand, although the statement is true that dictating magazines is not a common activity today, it also has some errors about the truth. It is still an important thing nowadays. Moreover, it is very popular in old age, because the old extremely like to get the news by reading newspapers and it may become a main activity in their morning’s day. For another reason, magazines are also a vocation and there are numerous students who love this career, so it is also one of the important things in life.
To conclude, it is exactly true that using the Internet to get information is now more common than magazines. However, the newspaper is still an important factor in daily life and it may be renovated dramatically in the future.
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The pictures show the layout of a cinema in 1980 and the same cinema now Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple can get it on their phone. Secondly, the news is also played on TV everyday. ...
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Line 4, column 31, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...condly, the news is also played on TV everyday. To be more detailed, several programs ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8661971831 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75382729467 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510563380282 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6827708831 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948657417004 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342392648333 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020866297145 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507103744818 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186914364452 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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