Now children do not behavior as well as the children did in the past. Which one of the following measure do you think can help children (age 5~10) behave better?
Nowadays, kids have widespread behavior, which did not happen in the past. Notably, it seems that between five til ten of their age. Majority of approaches available to enhance the behavior of children these days. Although, In my idea, it is better to observe the action of children and making the right decision for controlling them from the social and economic aspects. This essay attends to examine this approach to developing children's behavior.
In the first step, the monitoring community of children and peers can give us social characteristics that play an essential role for the parent. A way of explanation, in the group of children, it is the trend to mimic a vital pattern of behavior that reshapes their personality. In some cases, a few girls have participated in some social activities that can be acted by peers as managers. However, it is not clear where and what is the origin of the pattern. Moreover, a significant role of the mother is that they should have a path communication skill to discover a model of behavior that is very close to their children. To sum up, from my point of view, concentration in some social activities of boys and girls can help the parent to develop the behavior of their children.
Something is clear from the mind that having a connection close to the boy and girls can avoid extra wasting money to treat their behavior in the future. For example, a massive budget around the world has been invested these days by a few countries as more developing countries to improve their educational system annually. Nonetheless, if they can understand the role of children in a little group directly, they will manage the money for the correct path of life and help to grow personal attitudes. In other words, the facilities can exert a direct positive impact in an educational context on the children and can engineer the behavior at a specific age. Consequently, i believe that consider the children is more valuable in wasting money to hire psychologists to treat them.
It seems that in less developed countries, the majority of the family focus on the managing time of children with TV. Even this method have their value for the parent. For instance, the majority of aggressive program has been limited by the parent to prevent showing for their children. However, it is not accurate from the psychologist's vision that defines the children for something, and it causes isolation kids. Besides, attending the children in a social group with peers can be beneficial for both boys, girls, and families to improve their social skills.
In conclusion, I defiantly believe that parent should observe and monitor the children to know better the variety of type of pattern which has a positive and negative impact on the children’s behavior and it prevents to spend more money for treating the social disorder and invest money for developing an educational system for them in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
...havior at a specific age. Consequently, i believe that consider the children is m...
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...veloping an educational system for them in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2433.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 494.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92510121457 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75037752643 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457489878543 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 760.5 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8645337132 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.590909091 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261044973511 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893950950934 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512932300257 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170720835621 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03969397325 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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