Nowaday people throw away old things and adapt new things . Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible ecomic advantages.
Modern culture is an consumerist one. It is also known as dispossible culture or use and through culture. One such issue here is of old things , and new things. This particular topic asserts that is replacing old things, and accepting new things. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On one side of the argument , there are people who argue that the disadvantages of considerably outweight its benefits of additional resources are used and take longer decompose. Furthermore, many people used which materials then this materials can not easily decompose in earth . So, produce the different types of pollution like soil,air, and water pollution and so on. In addition to this demands of machinery , and electricity are increase day by day , and this is also produce more ppllution, and waste of money. In instance that Canada and united state of America contain only 5.2 portion of the world pollution are accountable 31.5 share of consumption while South Asia which has 22.4 percentage pollulant is responsible for only 2 percentum of consumption.
On one side of the agrument, there are people who argue that the advantages of minimizes number of ancident such as death, and roberies because when the new technology are coming in our life then every person would be become good life , and safe there life.
As we have seen there are number of answers to this question. On balance however, I tend to believe that three hours which means reduse, reuse, and recycling. Then, the possibilities are endless a person just have to take initative and make the change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97769516729 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70548875834 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3168030543 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0878125614005 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304759473533 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507156870765 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478314749515 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296075019804 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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