The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000
The circular and horizontal charts show the information about the utlization of water in different nations during in 2000.
The data is calibrated in percentum.
It can seen that 70% water used by agriculture.In additional to this 22% water was consumed by industry level.Moreover,in domestic had spend with 8% in the year 2000.
As far as trend was concerned in India was more water consumed in agriculture(92%), and 5% in domestic, indystry(3%). Apart from all this 80% water used in industry, 12% in domestic purpose, and(8%) in agriculture in Canada. Futhermore, in New Zealand, and China nations were water used with(44%),(69%) in agriculture, and 46%, 9% in domestic then 10%, 22%, in industry respectively.
Overall, it is evident that the maximum water consumed in agriculture by India.While the second maximum water consumed by industry in Canada.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, then, while, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31617647059 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24223019863 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7774420741 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263163453698 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117758611919 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094184196617 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138958160933 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107043999331 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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