Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the saftey of other products. Some people are argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is said that"animals are deserve a chance to live". With the steady growth in modernization, the lifestyle of people have been greatly effected. They have achieved various milestone however some issues are remain unchallenged and as complex as even. One such issue here is of the experiments on animals. This particular topic asserts that should experiments on animal for saftey and development of medicines; it is banned or not? Through this essay i shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
Taking one side of the argument, there are people who believe that experiments should be banned. The first and foremost reason of banned that the lack of diversity . Apart from this, if the experiments are done on the animals the animal's population less as comapre to past. Moving forward, the animals are always important for the planet to live as well as for survival on the earth. The best epitone of this would be the report prapared by the discovery they saw that the monkey or human structure are same so they do the experiments on monkey, as result of this experiment the so many variety of monkey had been loss.
On the flip side, there are entagonists to this assertion who beleive that beneficial for the safety of humanity. They bolster their view point claming that the death rate is decrease if we do experimenton animals because it cannot be possible to do experiment on any human being. So it help to tastify the experiments. As well as, if we found the solution of the diseases so the patients are not dead and survive their life. They further refer to example the survey conducted by the Hindustan times and they found the 70% patients life was saved by using that medicine which firstly test on animals.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, i beleive that there is no single conclusion still i take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. There are some disadvantages of experiments on animals but on the other hand most benefit for the human kind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, well, apart from, as for, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70006002413 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2676392789 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245416258132 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736295483979 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748916723487 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144408937618 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346411511442 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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