Some people think that a person improve intellectual skills better when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree ?
Intellectual skills are defined as the method an individual can use to evaluate or organize information,and data. One of the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic the person improve intellectual skills better by group activities.i completely agree with the statement and shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraph.
The person improve there intellectual skills in group activities because in group better understanding in under the members of group, and the knowledge is also enhance, the fundamental are also clear in the group activities.The connection of knowledge should also build. A good illustration is the one survey was conducted by a one individual or another side one group . The one group is very easily solve and collection of idea more as compare to the individual person.
Moreover , the another plus point , and also the benefit of the group activities , the trust should build in a group member , and they also motivate to each other . If they motivate to each other the coincidence level should also be increased . A good example here is the survey of two companies , one company's employees motivate to each other and the second company's employees had not trust , and they jealous from each other . The result saw that after 2 years the first company in which employees trust and motivate to each other that was getting a profit and development .
As we have seen there are numbers of answers to the questions . On balance , however , I tend to believe that team activities offer a guided path to autonomous learning , and rational thinking which can impart higher cognitive abilities .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14606741573 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86215155057 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531835205993 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0314102467 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.909090909 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173417272425 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625656474296 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778811478477 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111106958404 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905551718257 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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