Some people believe that movies should be based on social stigma. While others believe that it should be based on real life heroes. Discuss both side give an opinion.
With the rise the the modernization. A man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bare footed in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are same issue which remain irrevocable and complex as even. For instance, the given topic asserts that the should movies are believe in both; social stigma or real life heroes. Movies are also inspire us, challenge are assumption, change are views some time break our heart to, and left our soil, and yes teach us life lesson.
Taking one side of the argument, there are people who believe that the movies are based on the social stigma. They raise many assertion is defined that the movies on the many different based such as: behalf of physical disability, based on gender, based on skin colour, based on nationality, and also the some movies are based on religion. A good example here is one of the most movie through pad man, Rk balki tells us and inspiring story of arunachchelan murugananth. Who invented low cost sentary napkins in india. A country where man trusation is till consider tebu. It is not ulked and discussed with anyone. This film raises important questions and make a people to sit up and take notice of a relevant film in today's time. It forses the mass to discuss an issue most people are scared of mentioning.
In the flip side, thare are antogonists to this assertion who beleive that the movies based on real life heroes. They bolstertheir viewpoint by claiming that the some movies are related to the real heroes. This movies are make to aware the youngest one about the heroes of our country. A good illustration that the bhag milkha bhag movie is baesd on ture story that how he struggle in our life and achieve the success, and famous not only in the one country also in the international level.
Nevertheless, weighing both the opinions, i beleive that there is no single conclusion, still, i take this ground that an effective clap require both usr of hands the both movies convey the message to the people, but its depend upon the people how they learn from those movies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72826086957 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51620457122 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540760869565 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3087256005 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5789473684 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3684210526 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332634111364 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895667503779 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108536673539 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177933801357 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577232099679 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.