Nowadays, experiments on creatures are extensively carried out to thrive novel medicine and make sure these medicine safe for all people. It would be argued that they are salutary for humankind. In my opinion, however, I think they should be prohibited because they are morally wrong.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some believe trying drugs on animals should be advocated. The first reason is tested beasts have structures like human, which helps scientists easily remedy for invalids. For example, once researchers utilize guinea pigs to confim remedies’ safety, people can use them. Another reason is that they alos can look for the best rehab for patients. In experiments, if the drugs had good impacts on animals, doctors could exert them for all people and vice verse.
On the other hand, I would argue that boffins should desist from doing these actions. Because we are maltreating all animals. They have emotions and feelings as people.When we do experiments on them, they fell hurt and scared. For instance, when we pump chemical into them, if the tests were unsuccessful, they might be injuried or died. They are always tortured by those. These are an immoral work. If we didn’t do that, they wouldn’t suffer any hurt and live happily with their friends. And the ecosystem is maintained balance. Hence, we shouldn’t use animals to test safety of medicine.
In conclusion, although some people support experiment on beasts to test cure, I personally believe that this mustn’t do deeds anymore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this medicine' or 'these medicines'?
Suggestion: this medicine; these medicines
... to thrive novel medicine and make sure these medicine safe for all people. It would be argued...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...should desist from doing these actions. Because we are maltreating all animals. They ha...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...ey have emotions and feelings as people.When we do experiments on them, they fell hu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08300395257 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58784939465 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656126482213 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6112947653 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4444444444 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0555555556 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225870084882 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664372430111 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557290465211 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133769190674 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353148916548 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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