It is not uncommon nowadays that a wide range of population with different cultural background, like languages, religions and value systems, can exist at the same time in one country. In my perspective, this tendency offers more benefits than drawbacks. In this essay, I intend to explore several reasons for this issue and explain my detailed opinion.
There are various factors that are attributable to this trend. To begin with, colonial history is a basic and considerable element that shapes the current situation. For example, New Zealand was sighted by Europeans in the seventeenth century and it was colonized and settled by English afterwards, despite the local Maori people had been there for hundreds of years. Moreover, in recent decades, the worldwide immigrant wave is another factor that contributes positively to the currently multicultural environment. Take America as an example, its well-developed educational facilities, better employment prospects and advanced healthcare services make it an ideal end for massive immigrants over the world.
Admittedly, this trend introduces a level of complexity to life. For instance, language barriers, distinct religions and unfamiliar social rulers will take up time and make life more complex, particularly for new-comers, and because of this, they are likely to lose their head and take troubles. However, these issues are not so serious that they cannot be resolved, especially when improved understanding is a real possibility in the future. In my opinion, the main benefit of it is it opens up the options for people outside of the dominant cultural trends. This provides the possibility that people are able to understand and experience various civilization outside of what the authority is trying to push. By living in a society consist of a variety of ethnic groups with various cultures, people will be able to develop a better understanding of each group and experience exotic lifestyles. That is why this trend ultimately is a positive development.
In conclusion, the drawbacks of multicultural society do not outweigh the advantages gained by allowing for diverse cultural experience outside of the mainstreams and therefore improved comprehension of our world.
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- Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world Ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel To what extent do you agree or disagree 52
- Nowadays cultures of different countries are becoming more similar than they used to be.What are the reason? Is it a positive or a negative development? Give your own opinion and examples. 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47262247839 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07502653462 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602305475504 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3693178955 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.6875 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120769911182 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036668427203 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267745864268 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672797056863 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437467766638 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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