Nowadays genetically modified food is widespread all over the world. While proponents of GM crops ensure that these foods are safe for human consumption and help to increase food supplies, others argue that their effects on health have not been studying long enough. Describe pros and cons of genetically modified foods
Over the years, the amount of genetically modified nutrients in all countries has increased dramatically, so they have become ubiquitous. The entrepreneurs, who propose these foods are convinced that their products can’t affect individual’s health and life in a bad way, while many people disagree with this point of view. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of genetically modified food.
To begin with, a lot of proponents of GM crops are sure enough in the quality of their products because they have already paid for many researches. In developed countries, such us the United States and the United Kingdom entrepreneurs aren’t able to send this type of food in local markets before the decision of special commissions. For example, the US government had made a legal act, where people can find the requirements for the genetically modified foods and also the allowed percentages of chemicals in them. Besides, the GM crops industry is developing right now and the abilities of chemical scientists has been improving too. It is believed that by 2050, the quality of genetically modified foods will have been equaled to the natural nutrients.
Nevertheless, a lot of individuals on Earth are concerned of this trend as they don’t believe in the statements of GM proponents. There are several difficult issues in developing countries compared to this sector, so people have been afraid of the genetically modified foods through the decades. For instance, Chinese modified production is extremely unpleasant for our health because there is no legal regulation in this field. Moreover, a lot of people have grown in countryside and they will never understand the pros of genetically modified nutrition. These individuals will always be keen on fresh vegetables, fruits and other types of food.
In conclusion, there are two different points of view for the genetically modified foods topic. Some people think that they are good for us, while others strongly oppose this opinion. I think that opponents of GM crops are right, so I always choose fresh products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28656716418 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93448778055 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546268656716 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4821698181 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334750259153 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1153106557 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051332450483 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219720658241 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304092649109 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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