Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
Have you ever imagined your life without technology?! Modern technology has reshaped our lives from the scratch mentally and physically. People are divided into two categories regarding the field of work specially as some reckon that modern technology has more work easier, while others argue that it has made people busier. This essay will discuss whether technology made the work field easier or made people busier in details.
On one hand, modern technology has simplified many work fields; for instance, it offered many online communication tools that helped in overcoming tough periods. Through out the pandemic of corona virus almost all the companies run their business using different ways of online communication and have access to the central hub in their houses. Moreover, it contributed in increasing the business productivity; for example, managers are using some software to track the progress of different tasks, add and comment on each task.
On the other hand, although technology has made work easier, it made people busier. Technology has made people busy searching for new technology software to facilitate business and help in accomplishing various tasks in short time. In the past, people used to be cautious of thieves to steal their important work documents, but now they are afraid of hackers which led them to search obsessively for antiviruses and other tools to protect their tasks. They focus on superficial work stuff rather than the business itself.
To put it in a nutshell, modern technology had became important in many fields. It helped people in many aspects especially the work field and saved the world for several catastrophes; but, it also made people busier while chasing new technology systems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: Throughout
...hat helped in overcoming tough periods. Through out the pandemic of corona virus almost all...
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Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...it in a nutshell, modern technology had became important in many fields. It helped peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28880866426 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68253153682 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.324236215 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446110861938 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182572827065 0.084324248473 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158019498356 0.0667982634062 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276123694473 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130530331036 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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