Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In today's society, there has been a growing concern over the past few decades regarding the increasing number of people opting for alternative medicines or treatments instead of relying on conventional doctors. While there are certain financial benefits to this trend, I believe that the drawbacks far outweigh the advantages. In this essay, I will present my arguments with supporting examples.
The primary advantage of individuals exploring alternative treatments is the potential cost savings compared to conventional medical expenses. In many countries, the expenditure on doctors and medications often exceeds individuals' monthly incomes. Thus, seeking alternative treatments that align with their budgets can be seen as a prudent financial decision. For instance, many international students face budget constraints that deter them from seeking professional medical help. While they may save money initially, using incorrect methods could lead to severe consequences, ultimately outweighing the potential savings.
Despite the advantages mentioned above, I firmly believe that seeking professional medical assistance remains the most effective approach for several reasons. Firstly, doctors undergo extensive education and training to accurately diagnose and treat various health conditions. In countries with limited medical expertise like Vietnam, affluent individuals often travel to developed nations such as the United States and Japan for medical treatment, highlighting the value placed on qualified medical practitioners. It is also the responsibility of governments to collaborate in reducing medical costs for underserved populations. Secondly, regular visits to doctors allow for early detection of potential health issues, enabling timely and appropriate treatment plans.
In conclusion, while there are certain benefits to exploring alternative treatments, I am of the opinion that seeking professional medical care is the optimal approach for timely and accurate health management. By prioritizing expert medical advice and interventions, individuals can ensure their well-being and mitigate the risks associated with unproven alternative methods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23588039867 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11327412871 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644518272425 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3513246702 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.133333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182210041431 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594531682042 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519009144022 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115067939049 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437297793089 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.91 12.4159519038 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.13 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.