Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting the usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Presently, it is becoming increasingly common for individuals to seek out unconventional treatments for their illnesses without proper medical help. While some may argue that this trend can reduce pressure on traditional healthcare system, I strongly believe that it has an adverse impact on people’s stamina due to the potential for misdiagnosis unproven therapies.
There are several reasons why medical community is often dismissive of alternatives and the main factor for this action is the lack of scientific evidence to support their effectiveness. These treatments are often based on personal experience or historical knowledge, rather than results from rigorous clinical experiments. Morever, patients may rely on information obtained from unverified sources, leading to the assumptions about their condition. In contrast, modern medicine is based on rigorous scientific research and understanding of the basic structures of cells, viruses, bacteria, cancers and various other maladies.
Another concern is that the use of chiropractic treatments can delay or prevent people from receiving proper medical care, especially serious or life-threatening diseases. Patients may hoping for a miracle cure, rather than seeking the advice of a qualified medical professional. This delay can result in the condition worsening or even becoming untreatable, leading to long-term suffering or death.
In conclusion, while the appeal of complementary therapies is understanable, the risks associated with its use far outweigh any benifits. Therefor, it is crucial for individuals to prioritize modern medicine for their health needs and avoid unproven or unregulated homeopathy.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Presently, it is becoming increasingly c...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94628099174 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23410140927 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648760330579 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7789368363 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.818181818 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08755524918 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312391462379 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0182207404862 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523158352708 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00516194024618 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.25 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Presently, it is becoming increasingly c...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94628099174 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23410140927 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648760330579 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7789368363 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.818181818 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08755524918 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312391462379 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0182207404862 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523158352708 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00516194024618 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.25 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.