Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying
alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, more and more people with health problems are trying to cure their diseases with alternative treatments and medicines instead of going to medical facilities. I believe this is a negative development and this essay will try to explain some of the basic reasons why an alternative treatment approach leads to adverse effects on human health.
First of all, the first reason alternative medicine is negative is because it is not based on scientific evidence. They do not undergo laboratory testing, whereas medical treatment goes through a series of trial and error processes. Alternative healing methods are based solely on cultural beliefs from previous societies in ancient times. So it can lead to negative effects to the human body. For example, Chinese medicine can cure cancer but so far there is no proof.
The second reason is one of the alternative treatments used for certain diseases. This method usually only treats the basic symptoms and does not cure the root of the health problem. For example, acupuncture is one of the treatments from China that people believe can cure many serious diseases such as diabetes, high blood pressure and other health problems. Meanwhile, those diseases will be treated differently in medical treatment.
In conclusion, today alternative herbs have become popular in many societies, I think it leads to downside development. The main reason is that it has no scientific evidence and secondly, one medicine can cure many diseases which in medical treatment, one health problem may have different treatment.
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but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28514056225 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73829032417 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574297188755 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3795194479 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299973599698 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997861424022 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804100623822 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190584496246 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107074044084 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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