Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
People these days mostly go against the doctor’s prescription and rely for their treatment on pharmaceuticals which are made for other purposes. Although it can save their money and time, it can also adversely affect their health. In my opinion, we should not consider anything without consulting with the physician beforehand.
To begin with, favoring other ways of treatment is both cost and time effective. Nowadays, doctor charge hefty amount of upfront fee for just a 5 minutes checkup, which not everyone can afford it. Also, the prescribed medicine is always expensive and unlikely for middle class individual to buy. This makes the alternative methods of curing and medicines more appealing to them. To exemplify, in Pakistan, most people are dependent on herbal medication for curing their ailments. In addition, it also saves time and energy because the patient does not need to wait for days for their appointment to a professional physician. It is due to these reasons, reliance on traditional way of visiting hospital for eradication of health problem is not prioritized by patients.
Despite few of its benefits, its adversity to health is much more than anything else in the world. When the doctor prescribe something, they take into consideration different factors. Most of the people could already be diagnosed with certain diseases, and if they take medication which is injurious for it, then in worst case scenario, it can also cause death. For example, my uncle lost his life, due to taking wrong medicine for the treatment of malaria. Moreover, visiting someone who is not a certified doctor, is also risky, as they lack the deep knowledge of different illnesses and body parts. They sometimes suggest locally made medicines, which can further exacerbate our health condition. Therefore, it would be wrong to treat ourselves with uncertified doctors or unfamiliar medications.
In conclusion, people are significantly in favor of eliminating health issues through unusual ways instead of the traditional ways. While it is efficient and cost-effective way of treatment, deteriorating the health is also promising through prioritizing it. As a contradiction of sorts, I would say that health should not be comprised at any cost and this is what makes alternative treatment methods more disadvantages than advantageous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the worst'.
Suggestion: in the worst
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... of treatment, deteriorating the health is also promising through prioritizing it. As a contradic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35405405405 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0027027027 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589189189189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9470783216 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.05 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19503121101 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605831523409 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286100888072 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127827564767 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145466352949 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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