Nowadays, in many countries, more and more people are spending their time away from their families. Why is this? What are the effects on themselves and on their families?
Once the country has been developed, there has been an increased lack of communication among people, particularly families. Therefore, some claim that the causes of this problem are reasonable, but they will have various influences on human beings. The reasons and solutions as well will be pointed out below, and I will try to draw some examples to make them more obvious.
First and foremost, high living quality is a vital factor for which adults spend less time with their families. It is undeniable that we are now living in a fast-paced society that forces people to move forward due to the exorbitantly expensive living costs. For example, the man who is the breadwinner must deal with various pressures to support his family, such as daunting workloads, burning midnight oil, meeting the deadline, KPI requirements, etc. Consequently, he can not allocate his time to the kids, even in his spare time. Moreover, keeping up the social economically requests is really tough for those living in poverty. Secondly, these days, there is a variety of entertainment that leads people to keep an eye on, especially teenagers. Adolescents are pretty curious about exploring new things by themselves, so they prefer listening to their friends to their parents. Additionally, the younger generation may feel a sense of getting bored once communicating with the elderly due to the gap generation's different opinions and views of society.
In terms of the impacts that are caused, it has a large number of negative effects on families in particular and society in general. The serious one is expanding the gap generation among families that misunderstand every sort of discussion, such as academic decisions and family budgets. Besides, less time-spending in families and more pressure they are put under will have an impact on society that makes the work done ineffectively and increases the stress levels of individuals. As a result, the life flow in our country will be slowed down, and economic growth as well. Nothing is more obvious than this example. If people are not able to succumb to the affliction, they will quit their job, which leads to a lack of employment among the companies.
In conclusion, there are many essential causes of less time-spending between one and their home. Thus, it is responsible for the governmental and local authorities to take an account into finding the solutions to alleviate. Last but not least, if they can spend more time with their families, their offspring will be raised without any physical obstacles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lack of employment among the companies. In conclusion, there are many essential ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, in particular, sort of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11510791367 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87057471729 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587529976019 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6579584385 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.65 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.85 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285319978359 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761592222035 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717055849501 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171001887892 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873364313366 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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