Nowadays in many countries more and more people are spending their time away from their families. Why is this? What are the effects on themselves and on their families?
It is observed that people with their families have spent less time. In my point of view, this trend comes from the changes in modern lifestyle, leading to both advantages and drawbacks.
To begin with, the fact that members in the family rarely spend time together is because of their busy work-study lives. Nowadays, people prioritize work more than time for their family, not only to make a living but also to have a position in society that is respected and admired by everyone. Occasionally, they have to work overtime or devote the majority of their time at the workplace, which leads to them hardly getting the time to spend with their loved ones. Besides, the generation gap is also a concern, the old and the young are different in thinking patterns, behavior, living habits and cannot find a common voice when living together which declines family bond.
Although people spending their time away from home have benefits, there are undesirable consequences for mental health and family unity. On the one hand, spending time away from other family members has the opportunity for young people to be independent when they cannot longer rely on their parents, and live more comfortably because they are not under strict control from the family. On the other hand, people spend a considerable amount of time apart from their relatives, a lack of interaction and communication might yield a feeling of constant isolation and loneliness and, thus, being damaging for a person's mind. Moreover, family members’ bonds are deteriorating.
In conclusion, modern lifestyle has made family links gradually disappear. Although spending less time with family members makes some people more comfortable living the way they want, it also decreases the emotion and unity in the family significantly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, thus, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15753424658 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64254883868 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0109197373 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419740402224 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169618553249 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871946387103 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262465928139 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586077294168 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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