Nowadays, in many families both parents need to have jobs.
What are some of the problems associated with both parents working, and
what are some of the possible solutions?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.
At the present time, it is true that families often need both the mother and
father to work but that childcare can then cost too much. In my opinion, the
difficulties linked to both parents having jobs are challenging but there are
clear solutions to some of them. In this essay, I am going to discuss some of the
difficulties and suggest a few answers.
On the one hand, when both the mother and father are employed full-time
certain problems occur. If the parents need to leave the house early in the
morning and get home in the late afternoon or early evening, they might need
someone to take their children to school or even take care of their children at
home. Childcare becomes very expensive. In addition, if both parents work, the family will probably need to own two cars, which means spending even more
money each year.
On the other hand, there are definitely solutions to some of these problems.
Some adults share the journey to work with other people, usually in a different
person’s car each day. This means that each family does not have to own two
cars. In addition, in some countries working parents can apply to the
government for money to help with childcare so that they can keep going to
work and paying their income tax.
In summary, there are certainly problems associated with both parents
working, including the cost of childcare and transport. However, solutions
include car-sharing and government benefits. In my opinion, the challenges of
a child’s mother and father having jobs are difficult but not impossible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47167228555 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53007518797 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7190910591 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310245968968 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102505332892 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652634008216 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899082675988 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703919963877 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.