Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care.
Perhaps no subject in the world is as likely to cause so much controversy as taking care of children approaches does, especially in the modern world where dual-income family is the norm. Regarding this issue, it is thought by families with two parents working full-time that elderly family members are the best choice for taking care of their children. From my vantage point as an opponent, childcare organizations are more successful in educating and instructing of children than the other.
Discovering hidden talents of children is one of the main reasons why kindergartens are the best option to parents for taking care of their offspring. By providing sophisticated instructional materials, highly- trained teachers and standard educational methods, these institutions develop children's talent. A case in point is my twenty-one-year-old nephew who is a famous singer, while his twenty-five-year-old brother, who trained by his grandparents at home, is just a worker. Obviously, childcare centers play a crucial role in the future life of children.
Another main justification to support the importance of nursery schools in instructing of children is that these educational institutions improve citizens’ performance in society and their personal life by enhancing sense of cooperation between children. By solving puzzles and creating shapes with building toy sets, when children in childcare centers collaborate with their peers, their personalities shape in positive term. Development of our society, range from engineering Smart intelligent aircraft to designing 3D decoration software, compare with past where childcare centers were not commonplace is an example of kindergarten importance. Clearly, how parents decide to take care of their offspring is paramount because it would be the basis of the children’s character when they grow up.
Taking into consideration these above-mentioned arguments, one can conclude that the best choice for taking care of children is childcare organizations because not only it create their personality, but it would also enhance sense of cooperation between individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...dcare organizations because not only it create their personality, but it would also en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75394321767 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38400681951 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589905362776 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3211555916 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331508330835 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116102244856 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803838841587 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197240019859 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755934553812 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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