Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think this is beneficial for children of these families while others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Globalization of the world has given birth to many trends, one of which is the movement of people from one country to another. In response to which, some proportion of masses opine that it is good for the young one's of the household, although, the others do not have the same view. This essay will tend to the arguments of both sides before my opinion along with conclusion.
Looking at the perspective of the former view, moving abroad does bring a lot of benefits to the youth. The preponderant one is the education as families usually shift to well-developed nations rather than the one which are still developing and former usually have better educational facilities and offers. For instance, Finland is one of the developed countries which is know for its free education and students with high level of knowledge. Another obvious benefit is the availability of various amenities related to job, transportation, infrastructure, comfort and luxury which allure people to migrate to foriegn nations. A good example of this is the Australia where there are big number of employment opportunities along with all the beauty and convenience.
Changing the outlook to latter view, there are some harsh sides which are often overlooked by people immigrating to alien nation. The predominant negative is the sudden change and adaptation to the environment which may not be hard for well-experienced adult, the same cannot be said for the immature children's. To cite an example, youth moving abroad for work or study purpose often seen struggling to adjust to alien nature as they need to live a very harsh lifr being bullied by native people and so on. Another aspect to it is that children cannot acquire complete knowledge of either native or foreign culture and often face pressure from parents and peers to live according to latter of former culture. To instantiate, it is very common in children of hindu and sikh families as both these religion want youth to keep their learnings in mind while living and mixing up with foriegn people.
Amalgamating my opinion and conclusion, I believe that it is the decision of family members whether they want to move or not, however, before doing so they should make sure that their children also agree and are prepared for such a change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...one of the developed countries which is know for its free education and students wit...
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Line 5, column 791, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this religion' or 'these religions'?
Suggestion: this religion; these religions
...dren of hindu and sikh families as both these religion want youth to keep their learnings in m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, still, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97127937337 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75530288572 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569190600522 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.0500565512 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3571428571 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224414237902 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070327212743 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358594022623 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131065115821 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238188951062 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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