In recent years, residents in metropolitan areas have been dealing with several common everyday problems. This essay will discuss two main problems, air pollution and high living expenses, which I believe should lead governments to encourage people to relocate to regional areas.
One of the main concerns among citizens in big cities is the increased level of air pollution which causes harmful effects on people's health. Due to the high volume of traffic, many pollutants are released into the atmosphere, causing a reduction in air quality. Additionally, basic expenses such as housing, food, taxes, and healthcare are relatively high for low-income groups. To illustrate that, it is immensely tough to make ends meet in city life by just doing manual labor work.
In my opinion, governments should spend their efforts to encourage big city residents to move to satellite cities. Firstly, it will reduce the number of vehicles on the street, which definitely low down the air pollution level. This lead to citizens better health, allow them to spend less on healthcare fee. Secondly, the lower population density will relieve pressure on the housing supply, where many people are being forced to live in small and uncomfortable spaces. Furthermore, residents in small towns can save more money by paying less for necessities, which gives them the chance to invest in different sectors like the financial market, education...
In conclusion, air pollution and the expensive cost of living are among the most serious problems that residents in big cities have to cope with. From my perspective, I think that authorities should encourage people to move to other areas.
- It is important for all cities and towns to have large outdoor public spaces such as parks or squares Do you agree or disagree with this opinion 61
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life What are these problems Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns 78
- Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 67
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 61
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28464419476 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7305040459 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625468164794 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8964676942 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234898885318 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745831348894 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068174717107 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14457465651 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473326268757 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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